Evaluation feedback from Pitch

Evaluation feedback:

At the end of the pitch the audience seemed to like it, they commented by saying it was good, however when asking them upon my faults during the pitch they also mentioned that I forget to put in couple other details such as the layout of my magazine. They said if it was mentioned then it would have given out a better pre-visual of the magazine. Furthermore, there were some things that needed improving such as some presenting matters, when presenting my colours scheme I typed the colours in their colour, I was told it wasn't vivid enough. If I was to present them in forms of colour blocks together them it would have given out a better visual of how the colours would like together.